She Is In My Dreams

A short love oem I wrote in a moment of inspiration

Kissing the lips of passion
Igniting insides of lovers souls
To caress, to hold

Envelope my fires in your wisdom
Touch my fantasies with your inner beauty
Roam free with me
Dream with me
Naked in the sands of time

Hold me tight and kiss these lips
free each other from the worldly grips
Dance through celestial paths
Brushing our skin across the stars
In love
In selflessness and in earnest

Kiss me my love
I know who you are

Reviews

[Michelle Lea]

Oh wow, I'm at a loss for words! Your poetic style of word usage, is extremely remarkable, just awesome!
Feeling like that about someone, well I know exactly how that feels and you put it ever so close to home for me. Well done, please never stop blessing us with your writing!

[Lyrical Love]

Nice escape for me.

[Lillian]

woah. this is so well written!!!

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I am wondering what inspired you to write this..not that it is all that important because you executed this perfectly..your words are intriguing and each line made me curious to read on and get to the ending..i loved it..i really like th imagery of this piece..the visuals are great..you had me captured from the start...i really enjoyed the read...even though the first few opening lines great i really liked the second section..
"Envelope my fires in your wisdom
Touch my fantasies with your inner beauty
Roam free with me
Dream with me
Naked in the sands of time "

[Amanda]

your imagination and writing style is terrific. i cant describe what i am feeling when i read this beautiful work. please never stop...

love you.......a

[!!..Love..!!]

This is a very Hot piece and tremendous use of visualization and all. I found your piece quite close to my heart at least.And thus it made me think of my boy and everything is this write is something I call very much "REAL"

Kiss me my love
I know who you are :)

[Shadows of Sight]

Reminds me of wandering through the beautiful forests in the early morning. and it is the kiss of the first dew drop!
I loved the imagery! It was so loving and vivid
What a wonderful tale of love! :)

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This was very beautiful.
Such love in this poem.
Makes me think of my loving boyfriend.
Very awesome.
Wonderfully written.
Great Job!
^_^

[Choosing Life]

another lovely ode...

knowing is half the battle...

*smiles*