Breathe Easy

I lead
I call : “follow”
I swallow all pride
I push spite away
Spirits my guide
Ride through celestial gates,
Silence my mind

Kissing
The Stars flying
Soaring, unconfined
Infinity’s playground of senses

The children of a blessed pretense,
Exited the capsule and the sands of time
Gazing into dark , capturing
Traces of light
Inside and aside, all and each
Beginning through endlessness
Together and free

Reviews

[Too Me]

You express your emotions well. This piece has great depth and flows nicely! *Lana*

[Pauline Marie Daley]

I love how your words seem to just glide in and out of my mind. Very nice poem, i love the lines gazing into the dark, capturing traces of light. Sometimes traces is all we CAN capture. Good job. :-)

[Bluet_Belle]

I agree:P

It is very whimsical, well written, and floaty, like a sail boat holding two dreamers on a sleeping sea:P well, not sleeping but calm and slow flowing, like honey or cane syrup:P

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Written very pretty, mystical, words floating in harmony with each other. Excellent write.