Man up or Woman up.

Tire of people who have too much time to cry and complain.

Man up or Woman up.

I'm tire of hearing about Tate.
This is a poetry site.
For words to be enjoyed.

Tire of the crying, moaning and useless words.
This isn't a message center.
Need a hot date.
Find a dating service.

Living, dying and trying to spread separation.
Just move on.
Man up or Woman up.
No room for tender hearts.
I asked for honest opinions.
I been told. Learn to write by the best writer's on the site.

I Man's up.
Tried to write better.
Thank you for the honest reviews.
Want no negative words or review.
Leave comment and rating deleted.

If Hemingway was alive.
He would tell you.
Man up and learn to accept criticism with a open mind.

No-one like a crybaby.

Tate is a good man. He isn't perfect.
I'm far from a perfect writer.
I write on most of my poetry.

Never too old to learn.
Please assist a old writer with mistakes.
I accept the help with thankfulness.

                       Coyote

Author's Note

Time to become a writing site again. Not a popularity contest or a bitch session..

Reviews

[David Scott]

I found this poem ironic...
It is a poem that becomes a personal rant. The very thing your poem is attacking.
The grammar give me the flavor of cultural dialect instead of "proper" English and I will assume that was your intent.
I had to smile at this circle of human behavior...
We are so much alike and we have so much trouble admitting it.
I understand you premise and I understand your frustrations, but I love this site. The good, bad and the ugly. This is human interaction with a lot of the filters removed. It is bound to get messy from time to time.
Keep writing your heart and this will be a writing site...

[Ruth]

Always moves me to read you, you have such a balance of life within your work, just wonderful! :)

[Flutterby aish]

Nice one......yup it is time to become a writing site again!!!!

[trainwreck]

This piece definitely addresses one of the issues I've seen from some writing on this site.
Grammatically, it wasn't the strongest piece you've done, but it still had your unique rhythm. Thank you for posting this.

[Shaunton]

I like this Coyote! When I read this, one word popped in my head "Acceptance'. Thanks for sharing this awesome writing.

[Stefon Napier]

Those who write want to be acknowledged. Words aren't useless.Misused, certainly. Misinterpreted, naturally but thats the way it always is isn't it. For everyone writing is a particular experience and grouping them together in one place will cause those experiences to collide. A human condition is that at some point someone is going to say what distresses them. So people are going to complain and are going to cry. I think if you joined this site then you are going to have to deal with other people's experiences. That's learning.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

I couldn't agree more, my friend, thank you ever so much for writing and sharing this, Coyote. Well said :)

[Joby Bottoms]

I've just joined and I'm still very excited about uploading my poetry to a forum that allows other writers to view and review it.

I like the irony in your words; to complain about people complaining in this form is interesting but your grammar needs some improvement. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

[Pat Ellison-Reed]

I enjoyed the poem, the sentiment and the rythym. Not perfect yet but good but read before you post, a couple of letters are missed out. Thanks for posting it, I agree with your sentiments and the poem is original.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the review. No perfect writer. Just people trying to get better.

[Shaunton]

To be honest, no writer is going to be a perfect writer or perfect Grammar instructor. Sometimes the intent with a writing when speaking one's own honesty is to make mistakes. There is always room for improvement. There are always word-processing programs to correct us even when we know we are right. Every writer has his or her own persona. It is not how you write but what you write that changes the lives and the mindset of others. .

[Pat Ellison-Reed]

I enjoyed the sentiments and I liked the rythym. If you want to learn, you are learning. The poem works. Not perfect but good and original. Thanks.