In your eyes

In your eyes

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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We can feel like kings or paupers when a woman bless you with love and kindness.

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           In your eyes

In your eyes.
I'm everything,
the sun and the moon.
The warm breeze that warmth the night.

I feel I could do anything when you bless me with your smile
and the tenderness of your soft and tenders looks.
For when your laughing eyes shine for me.
They make me want to dream and swim in your love.

My life was a circle of confusion.
Filled with many mistakes and errors.

Now I know joy and peace.
You make me feel complete and wanted.

Many roads of discontentment led me to you
and true love.

I understand life is fair.
We must know confusion to learn what is true and beautiful.
In your eyes. I feel safe and loved.
I know I found the softness of a kind woman who taught me.

You cannot walk alone.

                                     Coyote
                             Written in 1994/rewritten in 2014




© 2014 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
A rewrite. I hope you enjoy.

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I understand life is fair.
We must know confusion to learn what is true and beautiful.
In your eyes. I feel safe and loved.
I know I found the softness of a kind woman who taught me.

You cannot walk alone.

A wonderfully romantic and inspiration write, Coyote.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde. True love will come rarely in our life. We need to be thankful.



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Your words warm my heart, Coyote. You have a very loving heart, and it is a pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Joyce. You are very kind.
This is so romantic.

"I feel I could do anything when you bless me with your smile
and the tenderness of your soft and tenders looks.
For when your laughing eyes shine for me.
They make me want to dream and swim in your love."

Thanks for sharing a sensational piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Praveeta. Best days in a life is when we are surrounded by true love.
Praveeta

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. Yes, I agree.
This is such a simple poem that I see the power of love in. It embodies romanticism and I love how you just seem to inspire any people who find themselves to be in love :) A wonderful poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Courtney. I appreciate the comment. Love should be simple. To have the desire to make your.. read more
Romantically comforting piece Coyote, to fall into someone's eyes and feel that trust is blissful, a treat to read.

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Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda. Best days in a life is when all we need is to be near the person we love.
"...In your eyes. I feel safe and loved."

Those words are so sweet, CP...knowing that a woman's love brings you joy and peace.
Great!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading. We need those special people who help and love us for who we are.
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Of course, CP. We are one in that belief.
You're welcome. =)
And hers you are again with such wisdom wrapped inside each word. You are an old soul with the gift if being a storyteller!!! Excellent write my friend:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Lily. We need people who believe in us. Those are the people we can never forget.
I enjoyed the wisdom found in this poem. You expressed your feelings well.
We need to love and enjoy being loved.

I'm new around here. Your work is very good. I can't wait to read more!



Posted 5 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Claire. Ancient wisdom is what we need to listen to. I wished I pay attention when I was .. read more
I understand life is fair.
We must know confusion to learn what is true and beautiful.
In your eyes. I feel safe and loved.
I know I found the softness of a kind woman who taught me.

You cannot walk alone.

A wonderfully romantic and inspiration write, Coyote.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde. True love will come rarely in our life. We need to be thankful.
This was so very beautiful my friend. Sends a message straight from the heart. I can think of no better feeling in the world than knowing you have found the one who makes your life everything that it can be.

Very nicely penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Jack. I appreciate the kind words and the comment.
I really enjoyed this poem. I hope we all get to experience what you express here because it is beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Alicia. I tell the young people. Slow and easy. We need to enjoy life and love. Good thing.. read more

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