In your eyes

We can feel like kings or paupers when a woman bless you with love and kindness.

           In your eyes

In your eyes.
I'm everything,
the sun and the moon.
The warm breeze that warmth the night.

I feel I could do anything when you bless me with your smile
and the tenderness of your soft and tenders looks.
For when your laughing eyes shine for me.
They make me want to dream and swim in your love.

My life was a circle of confusion.
Filled with many mistakes and errors.

Now I know joy and peace.
You make me feel complete and wanted.

Many roads of discontentment led me to you
and true love.

I understand life is fair.
We must know confusion to learn what is true and beautiful.
In your eyes. I feel safe and loved.
I know I found the softness of a kind woman who taught me.

You cannot walk alone.

                                     Coyote
                             Written in 1994/rewritten in 2014

Author's Note

A rewrite. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I understand life is fair.
We must know confusion to learn what is true and beautiful.
In your eyes. I feel safe and loved.
I know I found the softness of a kind woman who taught me.

You cannot walk alone.

A wonderfully romantic and inspiration write, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde. True love will come rarely in our life. We need to be thankful.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Your words warm my heart, Coyote. You have a very loving heart, and it is a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Joyce. You are very kind.

[Praveeta]

This is so romantic.

"I feel I could do anything when you bless me with your smile
and the tenderness of your soft and tenders looks.
For when your laughing eyes shine for me.
They make me want to dream and swim in your love."

Thanks for sharing a sensational piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Praveeta. Best days in a life is when we are surrounded by true love.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome. Yes, I agree.

[Courtney]

This is such a simple poem that I see the power of love in. It embodies romanticism and I love how you just seem to inspire any people who find themselves to be in love :) A wonderful poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Courtney. I appreciate the comment. Love should be simple. To have the desire to make your number two content.

[Frieda P]

Romantically comforting piece Coyote, to fall into someone's eyes and feel that trust is blissful, a treat to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Frieda. Best days in a life is when all we need is to be near the person we love.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"...In your eyes. I feel safe and loved."

Those words are so sweet, CP...knowing that a woman's love brings you joy and peace.
Great!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading. We need those special people who help and love us for who we are.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Of course, CP. We are one in that belief.
You're welcome. =)

[Lily Mae]

And hers you are again with such wisdom wrapped inside each word. You are an old soul with the gift if being a storyteller!!! Excellent write my friend:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lily. We need people who believe in us. Those are the people we can never forget.

[Claire in VA]

I enjoyed the wisdom found in this poem. You expressed your feelings well.
We need to love and enjoy being loved.

I'm new around here. Your work is very good. I can't wait to read more!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Claire. Ancient wisdom is what we need to listen to. I wished I pay attention when I was young.

[Jack...]

This was so very beautiful my friend. Sends a message straight from the heart. I can think of no better feeling in the world than knowing you have found the one who makes your life everything that it can be.

Very nicely penned.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jack. I appreciate the kind words and the comment.

[Alicia Huntley]

I really enjoyed this poem. I hope we all get to experience what you express here because it is beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Alicia. I tell the young people. Slow and easy. We need to enjoy life and love. Good things take time and effort.