My eyes adored you

Thank you Frankie Valli and the Four seasons.

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                                    My eyes adored you


My sweet dream, my first dream and my last dream.
I loved you  since you  were my sweet and kind friend.
Always gentle and   sweet  words given to me by you my dear beloved.

 You held my hand walking to school and as we walked in the hallways of the High school..
I remembered your telling me of great dreams and hope.
I loved watching your face as you  sang and danced for me. .
I told you often.  You were so beautiful and perfect.

You laughed  at my words and we danced to song and dance of our time.
I learn as we separated.

My eyes adored you.   I learn words not spoken, burn more than words that were spoken.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

                            

Author's Note

New words. I hope you like.

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

I love this scene and its innocence - and that through this beautiful memory is realized regret and hurt not due to anyone's action, rather it is due to inaction. Thank you for sharing, Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Being young. With whole life ahead. Days of youth and friendship become the good days. Thank you Mai for reading and the comment.

[Mai L Nissen]

thank you :)

[binibiningmaya]

Wow cute little love of high school. :-)
Well done Sir. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Best days of a life are when the wine of youth and hope is in our blood. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[binibiningmaya]

Yea right sir :-)
You're welcome.
^___^

[Mauricio Montoya]

a first love your love a forever love simple words yet etched in time that only can come from the heart, this is what i see when I read this, a love that will never die. thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mauricio for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

New and certainly great words. I love this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Danny. Are old words re-used. Few words have never been written.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Any time. :)

[zephyr]

Wonderful write, Coyote Poetry:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Shinsei. I appreciate the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

What loving and lovely write, John. A real treat for the romantic:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good song allowed us to write good poetry. Thank you Pryde for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, the Frankie Valli song inspired you.....the innocence of what we used to call "puppy" love. Walking together to and from school and giggling about just about anything. Those were the days. Lovely. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

They were the best days. When love was easy and simple. Thank you Lydia for reading and the comment.