your poems are many times so wistful and romantic. this one could use some editing, however ... the pic supports the poem nicely and vice-a-versa ... so amazing what a simple smile can mean to someone ..we just never know what acts of kindness can accomplish ... enjoyed reading ... romance, women and smiles are infectious :)
E.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Einstein. I appreciate the honest comment.
8 Years Ago
hey! we are up early this morning .. have you had your coffee? ;) love and peace sir!
Any woman would be very honored to have this written about her. Typos aside, I like to focus on the message, becuz your word choices are quite perfect & gentle & all-encompassing. Thanks for sharing.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you my friend. A woman smile and kind words. Can make a another life worthwhile.
yes there's more to a smile when a woman smiles that is for sure, it resonates beauty, warms the soul and is a comfort to the one who produced that feeling in her to begin with. great pic, nice poem john
I agree. A woman smile and kind words. Can create peace. My dear Grandmother favorite saying was. "B.. read moreI agree. A woman smile and kind words. Can create peace. My dear Grandmother favorite saying was. "Better to solve problems with sugar and honey than loud words and bad actions."
Not, not, NOT 'just words' but YOUR words, John - written in your very special voice.
The photograph is a perfect accompaniment to your thoughts, perhaps memories.. Tis said that when a woman smiles with both her lips and her eyes, every sigh of her spirit loves the recipient!
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8 Years Ago
The smile of a woman. Make you feel worthwhile and alive. Thank you dear friend for reading and the .. read moreThe smile of a woman. Make you feel worthwhile and alive. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.
Lovely, sweet poetry. You have a beautiful way of writing about women. It is uniquely your style. You have a gift for making the female reader feel special and for bringing out the humanity of romance.
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8 Years Ago
We hope there is humanity in romance. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.
When a woman smile, my world dances to her jade eyes, honeycomb lips, and her teeth of crystal stone, I love this , for appreciating one of the power of women.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Some smiles just do that to you, they mesmerize you and bring such beauty to your world that it truly can be a poetic utopia. This poem is as beautiful as I am sure her smile is.
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8 Years Ago
Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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