The color of love

Just words

                             The color of love

Dear lover. You made me come alive.
The fire in you eyes make me wish to swim in your brown eyes and
drown in the the gentleness of your voice.

Your sweet kiss made me find new places to feel and know.
The color of my world turn to multi-colors when we embrace and
we find safety in the warmth of the midnight hours.

You are my brightness and my darkness.
Your slender shoulders moving with the late night song and
your hips wavering slowly to sweet music made my mind and eyes.
See perfection  in light and in darkness.

The shadows dancing of us on the walls making the color of love come alive with scented candles
and our secret love dance. For us to know alone.

Love is shared and worship when the color of love overtake the fear to escape.
True lovers hold on tight, making the night turn to day and
swim forever in the memory. Love was touched by two honest hearts.

                            Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Emily]

I love the line "The color of my world turn to multi-colors when we embrace and
we find safety in the warmth of the midnight hours." Beautiful word choice throughout the piece. Also, I really like the contrast of "You are my brightness and my darkness." Keep up the great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Bacchus]

when the color of love overtake(s) the fear to escape
your best line here.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Bacchus for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Ana R]

Beautiful, soulful, and sweet. You radiate the attractiveness that this woman exudes and make me want to see her. I loved the secret love dance line, very intimate.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ana. We need secret places to dance.

[Inject Positivity]

this was sweet... as it flows with romantic passionate love... love is magical and by portyaing it in such a beautiful way you made it more pleasurable to read... there is sweetness of love in the poem that makes the reader's heart flatter.... this was brilliant.... full ratings....

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the positive comment. I do appreciate.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

I always enjoy thoughts penned to page of love, life, and romance, for without these life would truly not be worth the living ... Thank you for sharing ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Crimson_ish]

Love is indeed within the lines of simplicity and those pure, little moments that go by in a blink. I love this poem, it's just so pictorial, and raw, and simple. Lovely read!

"Love is shared and worship when the color of love overtake the fear to escape."
That statement is a truth to relish.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

"Love is shared and worshiped when its color overtakes fear..." I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. Love can overtake the deepest wounds.

[Emily Sutliff]

John,
This poem is really moving and you use really great description and makes the reader feel like they have a special lover. You made me think of my boyfriend and the way I fell about him. I like this a lot and I think you should continue to write pieces like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily. I appreciate the comment.

[Érenn]

I must agree with Dan women seem to be often in your writing and they have brown eyes in general ^^ Again i would say "Just words eh?" Really enjoyed the read. The way you pen your writes is excellent smooth and sublime ^^
Again just something I spotted last verse first line. "The color of love overtakes the fear to escape" not overtake. That' s it ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Errenn for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Érenn]

Your welcome ^^

[Ellen Kolman]

Sigh.....color me blush....I love this ... everything about it....I love it...so beautiful poetry... and I just figured out that you are also John...apparently I am not too bright, but I love the colors....and color me one of your fans...BRAVO

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ellen. I appreciate the kind words and the comment.