Wanderlust

Just words

 


                    Wanderlust

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                         Damn those eyes

Pretty face, demanding loving eyes.
Soft voice making me feel weak and captured.
Soft touch of hands making me fall into deep embrace.
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.
Damn those eyes.
Those eyes make me want to know wanderlust and forget where I was going
Fall into your embrace and become drunk with you in a wild love and untamed love. You and I.

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                        Write on me

Milky white Winter skin showing and your robust body moving slowly to the song.
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving. Leonard is singing "The Stranger song" and I watch you dance for me. You fall to my feet and you whispered. "You are my poetry, you are my love, you are my curse and I need you to make me pay for loving you. Write on me. Write deeply upon my wanting skin. Epic words to make the Gods jealous and I need you to make me feel wanted and needed. Make me scream, make me yearn and make me love." The poet smiled and he tasted the sweet kiss of his loving woman and he whispered. I love your face, I love your voice and I love when you whispered to me to me my kind muse, my lover and my darling. You are my everything and I will write a 100,000 words of love for you.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

                        



                      

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Beautiful and so lovely!

One of my fav. lines:
You dance near the candles and the candle lights are weaving.

A little touch (e) of sensuality & pleasure you keep within the depth of your words. For a moment, I was just like: "wow". Every inch of your niche words's very measurable & lovingly written. You ain't just speak the heart but also "write" down its beats upon... poetry. Great job, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

The singer is amazing too. A talented lady. My muse for many poems. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Wórdsmíth]

Of course, the lady is as white as flower, as soft as its shadow, as lovely as love, and as talented as a full combo of music. You have a very great choice, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I would love to see her in concert.

[Lina Lotus]

Swept away in your sea of words! Magical feelings-this made me smile. Lucky lady:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Just words and wishes. Good song made old places seem nearer. This singer is amazing. Thank you Lina for reading and the comment..
Coyote

[Manu]

Amazing words, coyote!
I especially loved these lines:
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope. Damn those eyes.
Those eyes make me want to know wanderlust and forget where I was going
Conversation, expression and exchange of feelings between lovers is beautifully described here.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Gorthi. Wanderlust. A wonderful word.

[Ken Simm.]

More than just words John. In my humble opinion, one of your best. The story told shapes the views of the reader and the protagonist becomes such a real person. Wonderful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ken. Was my attempt at short poetry. Trying to be less epic.

[Bala Gorthi]

This write is brilliant. This seems your style, free flow, wild and unique and with deep impact.
Those eyes make me swim in the dangerous river of hope.. This is beautiful for me and loved reading it.
The way you make your muse speak to you is very unique..
Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Bala. I appreciate the comment.

[Evan Scott]

Very nice work and imagery, John.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Evan. I appreciate the comment.

[Paul Bell]

Words are all you need. Especially the right words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Paul. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Tony Jordan]

Wanderlust is such a beautiful word John.
What a great title.
Your write here does it justice.
I love the thought of lover's writing on each other - be it tattoos or playfully with pens or even and most sensually with the finger tips on naked flesh - watching the skin and capillaries react to the touch - to the spark of energy being shared like a welder's torch - causing excitement and waves after wave of goosebumps. Wow - such eroticism

Very tastefully done here John.
Excellent write!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Tony. I do appreciate the comment. We need to drown in wanderlust a few times in a life.

[Tony Jordan]

Welcome John

[Valentine]

Funny how those eyes can affect you. My husband was the only man I ever dated with blue eyes. Guess they got through to me. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Those eyes can be dangerous. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Meshalini]

Amazing, such a lovely and beautiful poem...

Well done friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Meshalini. I appreciate the comment.

[Meshalini]

You are welcome...