Dear Paloma-for book

Just words

              Damn those eyes




You make me so crazy my dear Paloma.

Damn those eyes, damn those green eyes that steal my thoughts and my dreams.

You and I. Kindred spirit seeking proper peace and calm in the center of the hurricane.

Your beautiful face, a poet's dream and painter's wish. I painted a million words describing skin of silk and a smile of gold.

We have known chaos and we have known the tenderness of love.

You taught me dear Paloma. The body will heal, the mind shall find peace and better to fight for something than die for nothing.

You and I. We spend sacred time together.

We have lived in a world of confusion and we have burn sage for the sick and the forgotten people.

My dear Paloma, I would serenade you with song and words till you loved me no-more.

Damn those eyes, damn the softness of skin and how your hands can steal away my pain away.

I was condemned to love you and when you are near. I know I'm safe.

Sometimes we shall love forever and my dear Paloma.

Everything was you and you were my everything.

                             John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

New words.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Amazing image and eloquent, passionate words. Great imagery- "green eyes that steal my thoughts and dreams"...Paloma scintillates through the reader's mind like a sensuous, avenging angel. "Everything was you and you were my everything." Thank you for bringing Paloma to us dear Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette for reading and he kind words. I do appreciate.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Great writing, thank you for sharing it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Sarah. I appreciate the kind words and the comment.

[Weeping willow]

Wonderful words leading the reader through a journey.Thank you for sharing this Palmoa;-]

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[emmajoy]

'Damn those eyes, damn the softness of skin and how your hands can steal away my pain away. ~
I was condemned to love you and when you are near. I know I'm safe.'

Tis perhaps love's true equation.

John, dear friend, have read so many of your writings and found them - in various ways, touching to my core. But.. but, but.. this is MAGNIFICENT.. each word, each phrase drips with memory, with emotion, with literary strength.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the kind words.

[Patrick Ramsey]

I can really feel the vibe of your feelings. Love the metaphors! I feel a sense of confusion, then see grief at the end. I'm not sure if I'd change anything or not, but definitely nothing to take away those senses! It made me want to listen to your song and feel with you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Christopher. I love the singer. Paloma.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i love the imagery here....beauty it is....

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Wajiha for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Passionate, romantic and with that edge you always paint on you canvases Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.