Should I stay or should I go?

Just some words.

                           Should I stay or should I go

Wild world and free road was my love

my pretty lady never tamed,

never honest,

never true.

I was her last stop and she whispered to me.

baby, should I stay or should I go?

I told her,

can't tame the sea,

must wait-out the big storms,

Easy is never sweeter.

Door is always open for you and my door is swinging door for you.

My heat wave love,

my thunderstorm,

I am just waiting for the calm after the storm.

Please stay baby girl, you can keep me warm tonight and we can drink some coffee

in the early morning.

Early morning talk, we can discuss the escape or maybe find some reasons for you to stay.

                    Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just some words and a great song.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There's that famous saying, If the door's left open for departure or return.. you know it's real when the return becomes permanent. Perhaps with some extra love and trust, that quote proves true1

' My heat wave love, - my thunderstorm, - I am just waiting for the calm after the storm. '

Fine write, John, as ever in your special voice plus - the patience and honesty to juggle the odds!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must juggle the odds dear Emma. I appreciate the comment.

[R.E. Ray]

I think most can see themselves in this scene, a bit anxious, fearing a bad outcome. But, everything looks and feels better with the first sip of coffee, especially if shared. Good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[BBP]

Love that song as well. Cool write with a fun story line. Always love those restless lover stories!

[Coyote Poetry]

Restless love stories are the best and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[BBP]

Very much so, I don't think I can write anything to do with love without that restless heart bleeding on the page.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

been there and done that, Coyote....asked myself that question more times than i could count.
and sometimes i should have gone...but eventually she left, so the decision was out of my hands. I guess i was always stubborn in love.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some woman are runners. Thank you Jacob for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

The decision to stay or to go is a heavy one. When someone keeps the door open for you to do either, that is freedom...and that is true love. Again, your words are well written. Love the song too. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked her version of the old song too and thank you Lydia for reading and the comment.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not too sure if this is sad or not. Sometimes, for some people staying is right, for others freedom's road beckons and is far too irrisistible.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime, being free is over-rated. One day, we learn we are alone and there is no-one to love. Thank you John for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Laura Kate]

"I am just waiting for the calm after the storm"

Stay is the answer
Even if you can't find a reason
Stay and one will eventually come

I love you use of metaphor and your visual imagery.
Thanks you for sharing
Laura

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Laura. Some people are runners. They must run.

[Laura Kate]

I read this differently; as a choice between staying in this world and going to the next (that's how I saw the revolving doors, and the storms) rather than, moving between places in this same world (In which case, I change my answer to go).

[Stella Armour]

what a considerate lover you are, but butterflies need their freedom :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stella. Some people cannot be caged.

[Stella Armour]

No, their freedom is often what attracts you to them ..