Swirl me in your mind

Ayla Nereo beautiful song and some words.

                            Swirl me in your mind

I remember tracing your body with my fingers, I remember you whispering to me.

Johnnie, Johnnie. Are we just whispering in the wind, just secret kisses shared in the midnight hours.

You loved the two hour massage and the song of Leonard Cohen. You were my Winter California storm and  I was the quiet lake. I kissed your knees and I told you.. We are just furious souls seeking something beautiful in our messy world. 

You loved San Francisco. We would drive highway one from Monterey to the city that never fall asleep. We stopped at every ocean exit and we danced. You would ask me. Please Johnnie, Johnnie. Swirl me one more time. Don't stop spinning me. Someday we will need these days.

In San Francisco, after the taverns closed. We danced at the pier for the Pacific, danced for the stars and the moon. I remember you kissed me a hundred times and you asked. Please Johnnie, Johnnie. Swirl me one more time. Let's create a canvas of forever.

Today I live in Michigan and I remember my beautiful North Dakota girl who loved to laugh, be bare-a*s by the sea and she made life wonderful and sweet. Her words, now are true. "Swirl me one more time, don't stop spinning me my love. Someday we shall need these days. "

I do need a day spinning a memory, dancing with my muse of hope. One more time.

                        Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Sometimes I wonder how much of your writing is fiction and how much of it was real....but at the same time..I know it really doesn't matter. You create your own beautiful world of beautiful places and beautiful women.. and each come to life in the mind of your reader so vividly that it's like one of our own memories like we watched the events unfold ourselves. They resonate with us on the deepest levels. This is why I love your work. This is no different. Beautiful. Stunning.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime with time and distance. All life seem like fiction. In California, I was the roaming. Many joined me in roaming highway one. I was lucky. Station in Monterey and no bills. I need to find this place again. I Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[light and ashes]

It was my immense pleasure Coyote.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a memory full of ecstasy and tenderness. That is a memory that could keep you warm on the coldest of days.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John... your whirling dervish dance is
provocative and playful. May your dreams be
realized and bless you along the gentle waves
upon the shore. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Pat for reading. I need a year near the sea.

[Patricia Wedel]

Dipping toes in waves of emotion... dancing 💃 freely... Amen