The secret to your smooth sensual writing --> you keep it all in the realm of how it feels. The minute a poet gets too cerebral, it's a buzz-kill. You describe a meeting of the flesh like you're still a horny 16-year-old with a one-track mind . . . which might seem a little creepy coming from an old fart like you, but I mean this in the best possible way. I try to recapture youth in my sensual poems, but your poems give the impression that you still fully DWELL in your youth! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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3 Years Ago
Even in old age. We must adore the skin, the face and know passion. I have loved women and each one... read moreEven in old age. We must adore the skin, the face and know passion. I have loved women and each one. Never the same. We must stay young in the need of the kiss, the dance and the sexual dance. Thank you dear Margie for reading and the comment. I have been listening to Jazz. Takes me back to Austin, Texas and dear old New Orleans.
3 Years Ago
Lovely poem Coyote in its sweet sensuality. Makes us dream...you can hear soft jazz in your mind as .. read moreLovely poem Coyote in its sweet sensuality. Makes us dream...you can hear soft jazz in your mind as you read it...S.
So utterly sensual Coyote. Your readers certainly feel the heat here. Slow dancing to jazz, skin to skin, simply delicious. A most passion filled write and enjoyed as well.
Chris
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3 Years Ago
Hello dear Chris. Dancing, silence and good song. The good nights and thank you for reading and the .. read moreHello dear Chris. Dancing, silence and good song. The good nights and thank you for reading and the comment.
Beautifully sweet and sensual. A treat to read! :) Julie
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3 Years Ago
Thank you dear Julie. I had a Jazzy song night. All I need now is a Jazzy voice. I would sing these .. read moreThank you dear Julie. I had a Jazzy song night. All I need now is a Jazzy voice. I would sing these words.
OH MY! This is so seductive and filled with desire! Those photos will have some of the men at the cafe drooling! Your muse must be your ambrosia for you to write such steamy words! Wonderful, John. Lydi**
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3 Years Ago
Hello dear Lydia. The good jazz making me write. If I could sing. I would sing these words. Thank yo.. read moreHello dear Lydia. The good jazz making me write. If I could sing. I would sing these words. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
The need for closeness to awaken something that has been dormant and sleeping for too long. The uninhibited connection of romance and lust combining in a fiery night of passion without hesitation.
This is a little different from your normal style but I like it just as much with its more blunt openness and shorter lines telling a clear story with all that heat and passion that is painted.
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3 Years Ago
The amazing song got my mind working. I love the jazz. Make me want to write. Hello my dear friend a.. read moreThe amazing song got my mind working. I love the jazz. Make me want to write. Hello my dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment.
Depends on my mood but often if I listen to blues, Social Distortion or Flogging Molly I will get th.. read moreDepends on my mood but often if I listen to blues, Social Distortion or Flogging Molly I will get the urge to write but I have declared to myself to write everyday even if it is only a sentence. So far I have kept to it for around three months give or take a week
3 Years Ago
I write poetry in my dreams. My poor mind. Never rest. I must meditate to sleep. Writing had been my.. read moreI write poetry in my dreams. My poor mind. Never rest. I must meditate to sleep. Writing had been my backbone for many year dear friend.
3 Years Ago
I’ve woke up with an idea to write about before or as I’m almost asleep.
And what a muse she must be!! Satisfies many of your desires. This is true love, not "paid "passion. "you make the sleeping man come alive" is a great line; could this be a dream???? In any case, you know how to use those very sensual words to describe the intimate tryst. Excellent writing, always enjoy it.
Best, B
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3 Years Ago
Hello dear Betty. Just the good jazz and the prayer for the good days. Thank you for reading and the.. read moreHello dear Betty. Just the good jazz and the prayer for the good days. Thank you for reading and the comment.
The secret to your smooth sensual writing --> you keep it all in the realm of how it feels. The minute a poet gets too cerebral, it's a buzz-kill. You describe a meeting of the flesh like you're still a horny 16-year-old with a one-track mind . . . which might seem a little creepy coming from an old fart like you, but I mean this in the best possible way. I try to recapture youth in my sensual poems, but your poems give the impression that you still fully DWELL in your youth! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Even in old age. We must adore the skin, the face and know passion. I have loved women and each one... read moreEven in old age. We must adore the skin, the face and know passion. I have loved women and each one. Never the same. We must stay young in the need of the kiss, the dance and the sexual dance. Thank you dear Margie for reading and the comment. I have been listening to Jazz. Takes me back to Austin, Texas and dear old New Orleans.
3 Years Ago
Lovely poem Coyote in its sweet sensuality. Makes us dream...you can hear soft jazz in your mind as .. read moreLovely poem Coyote in its sweet sensuality. Makes us dream...you can hear soft jazz in your mind as you read it...S.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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