First love

Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

                      












             












 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978

Author's Note

A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is so emotional and romantic, i really like it!
I was melting reading at this:
"Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts become one."
Thanks for sharing..Well done :D

[Ed Hart]

i glad i don't have pictures...i think i would melt...thanks again, old man

[Poetic Beauty]

First loves are always special loves. they tend to stick with us in a special place forever.

[Allan Eddings]

A lovely and sweet little piece, and as always with your work honest and from a personal experience. Such things make your work all the more approachable as a reader.

First loves, we never truly recover from that dizzying high and the inevitable crushing low - how wonderful are they for those facts? You have a few inspired lines in this piece that definitely raise it up. Personally I loved the line, "The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and who love[s] to dance."

Thank you for sharing as always.

Kindly,
A.E.

[Kes]

This is sweet. It's really nice.
Good work.
K

[MandaBear]

sweet! first loves can be sweet.

[Lovely Lady]

Sweet and charmed!

[BMColey]

"Long walks and talks leading two people to sweet dreams and wishes." my favorite part. nice piece Coyote

[Liderien]

Very sweet indeed. Such a warm write. Words a woman longs to hear from the man in her life.