First love

First love

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

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 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978


© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

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Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is so beautiful! I love how you portrayed first love and made the reader know exactly how you're feeling. Must have been someone special :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truly, utterly, totally beautiful.
Wow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice flow, And the reader can feel the love you have for this woman. Very nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful. Full of emotion. Very touching. A wonderful piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and sincere, how do i know it? I can read it !
That makes me want to have my first love soon :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I honestly feel like the grammar issue adds to the poem, somehow. It's beautiful in a simple way, in the same way that first loves are.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very heartfelt and full of radiant warmth, you have nailed the fuzzy side of love here beautifully...excellent write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe first love how it feels in ones heart i know the feeling and i respect what u have said in this piece it demonstrates how all it goes to that special person i love this piece keep making your poems

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when love touches the heart, life always has purpose, I agree.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A piece that lends to the times we all had thoughts of promise, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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