First love

First love

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

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 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978


© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

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Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near..................
awesome lines..................

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful romantic write of the beauty of your first love. Excellent work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You have certainly hit me at the core, Coyote Poetry. (And I am yet to meet one single individual who forgot his/her first love.) In my native tongue, first love is defined through more than one word/phrase. One of them translates loosely into "the hurt in the eye" - imagine that: our eye hurting all the time. Anyway, let me stop here while I am feeling overly sentimental. Thank you for composing this work full of universal emotions and - more often than not: heartaches.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful and powerful poem as first love is so very powerful. It can linger with us for a lifetime. The memories of that time and place where we were at. A truly enjoyable poem to read. Very very romantic and tender.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First loves...we sure can't forget them, one way or another they
leave a mark...
great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First Love is so very special ..one we sweetly carry forever..you wrote of it & expressed it beautifully Coyote ! I noticed your photo has been folded so it was carried in your wallet or perhaps a frame..Thank you for sharing this piece of your life..if I was her..I would be honored to be written of in such a sweet remembrance of youth...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know I still remember mine... a really beautiful and sentimental piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all remember our first love. Whether they were successful or our biggest mistakes in life, we will always remember them. And that first love is one so strong, it is hard to feel that same way about anyone again. Really hard to reproduce those emotions. When we're in it, we believe we'll never fall out of it. And looking back we realize we were stupid. Looking back, we also realize how happy we were and a part of us wants that naive phase of us back. You've described it well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow... amazing! i never thought! you're really a POET! it is nice that you describe your love story and really inspiring.. anyway i like you photo ! she is beautiful ;)
thanks for sharing Excellent poem for me :)
- Kuhr Gred

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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