Water's Cryistal

Water's Cryistal

A Poem by Lance
"

its a love poem 3 years old. (it is one of my first)

"
Wistful and untamed
Angry at none
Tonight we may die
Even though we know
Are love will
Stay For time to times end
Coming to the light
Reaching far and wide
In my mind we
Stay
Together
As long as the water lives
Lance and _______________ Forever to swim.

© 2010 Lance


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Lance
Please keep criticism to a low minimal.

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Very nice poem. All the words flow nicely. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more of your work.
~Bridget~

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Hi i am lance u can call me castiel. I like to write poetry and i like to watch anime (yes i know strange combo lol) but it is who i am. i am a nice guy and a good friend. more..

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