I just can't write about it.

I try to write about happiness 
I try to write about positivity  
so when you read this 
just know i am trying to write about the good
because there is good 
there is the sky when the sun is going down 
there are the clouds that look like oil paintings 
there are the stars that come out one by one then all at once 
there are the trees that sway and rustle 
there are the animals in the trees that sing 
there are the flowers that manage to grow anywhere 
there are the swings in the park 
there are the dogs that get walked in that park
there are the friends that I go on the swings with, in that park
the ones I point out all the dogs to
there is my family, each and every annoying member 
so when you read this 
if you read this 
know that i am happy most of the time 
but there is always the bad 
no matter who you are 
and sometimes when knee deep in the bad it can feel like there is nothing else 
I know there is 
I just can’t write about it. 

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem and the way you expressed your emotions in this poem was really beautiful..I can see that you are improving in the way you wrote this poem..I liked that you kept some letters in bold to tell the readers that you are trying it but you can't really do it..That was really good..And if there is something right then there is something wrong also..Life is not a bed of roses at last..You will find thorns also alongwith beautiful rose petals..Well done , and next time try adding rhyme scheme to your poem as that makes it look more beautiful...Overall , It was really good poem and according to me , you were able to tell the readers what you wanted to ...
Keep it up and keep on writing
Riddhi