Choose

Choice to choose,

Nothing to lose,

Bring the rain,

Embrace the pain,

Everything to gain!

Eyes rest upon the greys

Tear stained and saturnine

Onward through mist and haze

Virtue adamantine

Forsake all that is lost

Fears remain quiescent

At any and all cost

Clouds part, evanescent

Choice to choose,

Nothing to lose,

Bring the rain,

Embrace the pain,

Everything to gain!

Rise up and elevate

Persistence incorruptible

Never capitulate

Nothing is insurmountable

Take pride, capitalize

Of opportunities present

An unquenched appetite

Feast your eyes upon my ascent!

Reviews

[OneWhiteTIger]

Again, I think your poem is a song. All you need is music to go with it and this could be a number one hit on the radio! You have a way worth words and phrases that defy the stereotypical!

[Chad Rogers]

This is the first piece i ever wrote and liked the inspiring words so much i turned it into a chorus. So yeah, i intended this one to be more like a song. The rap one was by accident lmao