Path to The Enchantress

Obstinate in my quest

defying iniquity with every breath

There will be no recess

until i am completely unlike the rest.

For that is the way to eminence

Through benevolence

I’ll achieve reverence

and earn the honor

to captivate the enchantress

Reviews

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Beautiful
The only way to be

So good you can't be ignored

[Chad Rogers]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to be in a place where my writing is appreciated.

[OneWhiteTIger]

I love this! The second stanza was ESPECIALLY captivating, not to steal your word, but it is perfect for capturing the feeling evoked! I look forward to reading more of your work!

[Chad Rogers]

Thank you so much! It's an amazing feeling to have someone understand and appreciate my work. Thank you for introducing me to this site. I haven't quite got the feel for it yet. But you were right, this is better than facebook.