Unlock the Dreamless Sleep

Unlock the Dreamless Sleep

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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How do we close our eyes and fly away when we find we are only human wearing a dress of skin..........

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Unlock the dreamless sleep
to see the truth
when afraid
you are the last face
with words of decision
bound to gaze into the mirror,
when you are surrounded by us
in the evening of our hearts'
and still know we are one
even if unnoticed
by anyone
in the light of day.

How do we close our eyes
and fly away
when we find
we are only human
wearing a dress of skin
and we remember how we met
and built bridges to be together?
Still, we both know
that a music flows between us
and neither one of us
can ever
forget the words.

The doors are wide open
and nothing is different,
our love is full of life and time.
Unlock the dreamless sleep
and see the truth,
my beloved,
look at us
in the evening of our hearts'.
We are still one
even if unnoticed by anyone
in the light of day.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*I have been unable to find out who the artist is for this image.......any assistance?

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can't tell you who made the image, but i can tell you this.. it is a combination of 5 separate images done in a .psd format using layers (; good poem too! -s the question is.... what is the 5th image (: betcha nobody can find it! it is actually most likely 7 images and a dot...... but still nobody will figure out the 5th overlay that is out of place in the whole photo (: i will make it easy.. Firebird, UFO. and of course the bird above the eye is the only one without a butt or a tail feather. So my final answer to your question is this.. there are 8 overlayed images made in photoshop.. a good effort.. but not professional so.. chances are... nobody will know who did it, because whomever did it, stole other art to make his art... lets call it a montange. I say that because, the clouds that are overlayed over the original clouds are a image that many Graphic Design/Web Designers use.. it is actually a thunderhead.. but whatever (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Michael :)



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Unlock the dreamless sleep
and see the truth,

I think these words speak on so many levels. Beautiful words and phrasing. I enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Paige :)
Shadowed...collected...balanced...when will people realise?
Hope you find the artist love, I am not sure who it is either...
Excellent poem...almost like a rite of passage...
xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy :)
No sorry I dont know who the artist is, its a very powerful image though, the subconscious mind seems to have a limitless amount of material to choose from with every one of our dreams being unique every night

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Leigh :)
Wow! Very thought provoking and beautifully panned out!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emmie :)
Beautiful writing as always! Sentiments of two loves forever entwined, whether willing to acknowledge it or not... fabulous!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you QSS :)
Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome! :)
"and we remember how we met
and built bridges to be together?" Absolutely my favorite lines!! They just hit me like a wave! The ending too was very well done. Great write as always Neva!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Winslow :)
I'm not sure who the artist is, however I adore your appreciation in words to it, well done, good read my love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas, so funny, I was just wondering how you were doing. :)
Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

Ha, well I'm working on something at the momet I'll beposting it soon, I do hope you are well! x

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Added on July 10, 2012
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