Hush the Crimson

Crimson fades away into a sensation of touch
As silence reigns admissibly
Courage stakes a privileged claim insomuch
As to become known as chivalry

Existence of noble-spiritedness speaks of gentle blue
Drifting in on courtesy divine
Magnificent to behold, never given quite its due
Delicious as a fruit
Upon a vine

Majestic is the profile of chivalrous comportment
Daring held within a gentle sign
A quietness that speaks to hush the detriment
Stirring among the crimson
In my mind

Crimson fades away, hushed by your presence
Upon your gentle blue I feed
Your gracious strength completes my essence
Silently you consume
All crimson shades
In me

Reviews

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good to read your words here my friend

[Lilly Negoi]

wow, what a rhapsody of crimson here! and "upon your gentle blue i feed" is such a catalyst for passion!

Wow , nice work , specially the structure and flow ... in my favorite rhythm and rhyme format .

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I really like the last six lines.I loved it when you said 'upon your gentle blue i feed'.Poignant writing..

[Art]

Nice work Neva...an enjoyable read of your thoughts...