Your Heart Writes - Mine Adores

I know and treasure the love you hold for me
And my heart beats back to yours
How thrilling to peruse the pages of ecstasy
That your heart writes
And mine adores

I read living lines that pierce my waking heart
Upon each lovely page I see
Each word justly claims myself to be a part
Of you
As you are, of me

Because I know you love me unquestionably
And my heart beats back to yours
I continue reading these lines with glee
That your heart writes
And mine adores

Such powerful writing a heart can display
When a heart beats back in return
How thrilling to peruse these pages each day
Watch love growing
As they turn

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

words don't have to be written to have effect...they can be intimated by actions...
and it all is poetry in some wonderful sense.

love this.

[Antonio Valentino]

Stunning...

whew... just love this to pieces.

What a romantic you are.

[Arabdha]

sweet and romantic..makes me smile..the title plays in perfectly for this one

[Jeremy Wyatt]

So good to see you writing beauifully like this, glad you are in such a good place Neva X

[LA Lorena]

This is beautiful. There is nothing quite like the rush of reading lines that are meant for our heart only, but visible to all eyes. Poetry can evoke those feelings like nothing else can

[fargone]

beautiful, as ever, neva. as always, deep and poignant.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We writes words of passion and love for those we love, and you Neva show us the way with your words my friend.

[Jibey]

Words are so powerful and penetrating... How well love is sustained by them...

[Moflo]

This had a great flow to it, the rhymes were nicely put together and the emotions came out clearly. Nice simple poem and great use of emotion. Great job.