Impassioned Sensations

Impassioned Sensations

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I can only dream of mysterious lands where I stop and stare.........

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I can only dream of mysterious lands where I stop and stare
At the changing faces pressed against my heart
This is where I tread so lightly under a pleasant moon
Where the fruits of all my cares laugh alone
When I see that, you are a part

Almost every night memories turn on winds moving within me
Until perfection stares into my face with ease
Impassioned sensations welcome endless curiosity
Although I am asleep, my heart races
While calmly skipping a beat

My hands are hidden underneath covers, as if contemplating
An inner voice that stares up at blank ceilings
From a deep slumber, I crush roses whose time has come
Delighting with no remorse as they disappear
Raining down, into my feelings

While I know, the stars cannot feel sweet waves in these lands
Still here now my fingers are helplessly crossed
Watching them greet the morning so it seems in debt
To the castles in the sky I see when awake
Full of wondrous golden thoughts

Tonight, I remembered that we have always been together
In mysterious lands where I stop and stare
Although your face pressed against my heart changed
The fruits of my cares have never laughed alone
You have forever and ever been there

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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. . . I like to start reading your older posts and work fwd. Just to see the growth of your writing, but already, it is at a high level.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Beautiful and heartfelt thoughts, composed with artistry and feeling... It is so good to dream and to cherish those moments, believing in the calling of the heart and the clear shining after rain... even after the roses have been crushed...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very sincere. Well worded too, direct to the point and very emotional. Good, strong write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2011
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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