Unwritten

 

Give me warmth in a close and quiet port with a song unwritten
So when the wind unveils her pride I will not know
I will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
Write the words to the song
With my harp of gold

Send me a reason to leave my warm and quiet port with you
So when the wind unveils her pride I will stay warm
We will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
With a new song unwritten
In both our arms

Promise me I will not long for the song unwritten I wrote alone
When I leave my warm and quiet port to write for you
Then I will dive headfirst into uncharted waters
Write the words to a new unwritten song
You can sing too

Our song will hold a thousand nights of memories of bliss
To keep us warm when the wind unveils her pride
We will sing each word together in harmony
While we dive headfirst into waters
With our warmth inside
 

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

There is a part of the writer's heart that no lover will ever know, ever appreciate, ever share--often, even if that lover is also a writer.
And what of the lover's life, how much will a writer really be able to truly involve him or her self in that? We want our mates to value and be part of what we do, but what we do is frequently all-consuming. Even if we manage every sincere intention to be wholeheartedly devoted to another, ultimately, there is only one lover whom we always desire and to whose arms we inevitably run--it is that constant communication with our own souls; endeavoring to clearer and clearer express what we have inside.
Sorry, Neva, but the sweet longing inherent in your thought-provoking poem brought these words to my mind.
Love the poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing more beautiful than the duet of two hearts beating in rhythm... a very romantic poem.

[Lily Mae]

Unchartered waters..safe quiet ports..you always allow me to stop and dream within your thoughts... Beautiful Neva..xxx

[Hayley]

I love the repetition in this; It really works for the poem. I think the perfect word for this poem is enchanting. It's truly beautiful.

[Art]

I am just amazed at your thoughts Neva...they seem to flow endlessly and tirelessly...one can see your depth and feel that creative imagination of yours...you will not tire us that is for sure my poetic friend... *****

[Robin]

you write well of the song ~