Dreams of Unknown Melodies

Dreams of unknown melodies become my companions
When the moon sits upon her throne, my love
Far away, more gravitating
Are the quivering stars in the heavens
Up above

My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees
In lines, my soul can name
Running ceaseless and as fair as fair
Can be

Within all the perfect strength I find from these two
There lies this land, where breezes blow
To chase away the fog
That softly creeps across my heart
With woe

The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again……….
My world is spinning round

Author's Note

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

Oh my goodness, I glanced at the stats on this piece and see a number which surprises. I guess by the number, 1046 views, I am not your only big fan. I am as amazed at the number as I am at how you are able to capture light and mist and the realms of hope. With the words, "My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace Blazing there, high above the tallest trees", I find myself looking up to warm my face seeking peace in the tallest trees.
Beautiful write.

[BlackCl0ud]

Lovely, "Fog that softly creeps across my heart . . ." Excellent imagery and emotional expression. ~ BlackCl0ud

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such a wonderfully light hearted poem full of carefree inspiration.. I can feel the magic of nature through your words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very smooth and delicate sounding that echoes i the mind and breast, well done.

[Alicia Hirshey]

I love the way that this poem moves. You always find a way to place your words so the reader cannot stray. I love this.

[Forest Green]

Nice movement in this poem...kind of a carrousel of motion, words that express the vitality of secret thoughts and vision...very nice.

Daniel

[SpokenWord]

Always in tuned with nature and with self, love is the ink that fills your pen. Love is intoxicating love is many things that you venture to express so beautifully.

[Lily Mae]

Another beauty that was inspired by the peaceful day. :) x

[Jibey]

Romantic, warmly reflective... inviting a hug... Come 'ere.. :-)

[Aidz]

wondered what the crumbs where from.....

Soothing n peaceful, reflective of yr mood the day it was penned

[unknown]

My world would be spinning around within those unknown melodies getting lost in time lol, lovely poem :)