I Feed That Which Brings Me to My Knees

I Feed That Which Brings Me to My Knees

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I feed that which brings me to my knees by hand.............

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My kisses are not eager to defend distant voices that say it is cold now

After all the joy of idle hours, when you were my valentine
I feed that which brings me to my knees, by hand
As whispers from leaves show me flaws
My head tells me are not mine

A river from my long ago flows in a victorious bout of peacefulness
Releasing silent showers into skies of vivid sunny blue
While my kisses are carried by muses that wave
At the sighs they find in these thoughts
My heart pens here of you

My ears raise questions that stare back at me utterly astounded
Asking why I fight that which brings me to my knees
When I know I may never, ever meet again
This place where my heart is guided
Into all my kisses can see

Echoes are heard here and there of transformation, whispered to me
My kisses are not eager to defend or take flight with wings
So I feed that which brings me to my knees, by hand
Close my eyes, as only sighs do I see
And this joy in everything

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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This piece is so dreamy and romantic and lovely! It takes me to another place, one where dreams come true and joy is abundant. Images of soft clouds floating in a bright blue sky, where trees rustle in a soft breeze wispering things to me softly. The line, "A river from my long ago flows in a victorious bout of peacefulness" is just scrumptious and beautiful.


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you always have such a beautiful poetic tone to your work...utterly magical

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Solid write and the perfect picture to go along with it. the intensity kisses the reader as they indulge word by word this carefully crafted piece, well done

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A great write. The style, the flow is so nice that I always want to follow it. You are my Guru Neva.

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A deep and dreamy poem. The description and imagery you set are stunning. The reality and hope in this inspires me. Beautiful write :)

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Breathes emotive warm sighs...
Blowing soft kisses of inspiration to this reader



Rossen

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Neva...Neva...Neva...I absolutely adore how this flows over my skin like warm satin. This piece is beautiful and so touching. Your work is so very beautiful!

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you had me on this one with the very first line. A haunting vision flashes by my eyes when I repeat this line. visions of the future, the past and all that is in between.
thanks for sharing this Ms Flores. beautiful as ever...

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Great write, as you always do...

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Wot can I say that hasnt been said

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"While my kisses are carried by muses that wave
At the sighs they find in these thoughts
My heart pens here of you"
Love this. I know I probably say it way too often, but this poem is especially beautiful and flows like no other!

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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