When Life Began to Dance

When life began to dance and tell the names of me and you
Heaven was met at the threshold of blessings
A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession

A seed began growing as a reminder of passion’s flame
Thankful incense smiled, quietly burned
Our line of sight passed into a mist filled with love
Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn

Into the air shapes of thought became as tender voices
Deeply settling into our hearts forevermore
They whispered into the dance of life with a pleasure
That sweetly opened the reasons we are for

Whirls of wonder welcomed a constant round of forever
The stars knew our hands must be joined
And we were led to sing the verses of a lovely song
A melody, only heaven could have coined

Reviews

[☯]

A romantic and passionate piece.
"A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession"
I really liked the sing-song type of feel it gave and the soothe flow. The title says it all. Amazing write :)

[EMF]

At Last.

A criticism.
The words, meaning theme's etc all perfect. The poem itself is perfection.
But the photograph does the poem no justice at all. All I can think of is Gerald Butler in '300'. That is the only reason I can't rate this poem at 100%.

[Art]

Heavenly...such love is the destined cry for those who can envelope it and hold it close for eternity...

[joshua deathdealer]

A beautiful write as always Neva "The stars knew our hands must be joined'!! Very sweet and romantic.

[kdpgrahi]

A very passionate love story. I appreciate the idea of growing a seed as a reminder of passion's flame. A lovely poem as ever from you Neva.

[Muse]

SMMMMoking hot and romantic The picture is hot, well he's hot. :) Your words talk of a love gifted by the angels in heaven, only someone as talented as yourself is deserving enough to write about something so special.

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Loved the title as it describes exactly how I feel about my wonderful new Welshman - artist/poet/polymath - you know the man who can - Jeremy Paul Wyatt!
Many thanks for a timely, moving read.
Denise Lucia aka Fairy Lu
x

[Sukriti Suki]

This is wonderful...I loved the picture, the poem, the font. The expression here is very romantic, subtle and tender.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Passionate, reverent, and genuine. lovely storyline with a gentle steady flow. i like the meanings braided into the piece.
Muy bien!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this tale of love and two souls binding together. This last line is endearing.