Words Have Eyes That Sing

Words Have Eyes That Sing

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Can one learn to be absent from this transparent house of glass...........

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Do you turn away from eyes that sing on nights filled with emotion

Never wondering if you could drown in your imagination
Without understanding all the poetry that dances in your heart
Warming words of choice, in your tongue of fascination

Do your hours exist in a sky familiar with moments such as these
Is there nowhere to look for heaven free of possession
Where words do not cry out to be contemplated by your pen
To become lovely music giving light to your obsession

Can one learn to be absent from this transparent house of glass  
And remove this flowing ink that runs within their veins
Still breathe without giving out a subtle handful of their soul
Each time a word calls out to be painted in a refrain

I cannot turn from eyes that sing on nights filled with emotion
My heaven is this possession in which I freely drown
You may not understand the poetry dancing in my heart
Still I will write, until I become dust, in the ground

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist Roger Suraud - http://bestbookmarks.net/art/roger-suraud-paintings-part-2

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Wow I live with a person, who I know is living this piece right here... Every word every line.

I can understand being obsessed with your art. If that level of passion is not there then is it really worth it?

Opening your heart and mind each day and putting your feeling and thoughts into things... into words... this is what makes you wake up in the morning it's what drives you... I completely understand your ending.... to write until you die :) well said beginning to end.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Love this poem :) It defiantly shows how much love you have for what you do. I love how this poem is written too :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Every time I read one of your poems I want to become a poet, especially this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


the last line is beautiful. you choose your words perfectly...damn. transparent house of glass? amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful and brilliant words spoken, poetry lives inside us, it sings, it bleeds. Marvoulous~

Posted 12 Years Ago


What beautiful words Neva, The last 4 months of my life writing again, I have almost found the inner peace I once knew. I don't know how I ever lived without it all these years. Reading it, writing it. You have described to a tee the feelings inside of me. That I feel, that a lot of us feel that write. We write to set us free. It does not matter if no one else understands we do. It's always nice when others get it and they like it but does it truly matter? For some sure, for me it's just an added bonus. The last stanza, it's perfect nothing else need ever be said. Bravo xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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the music flows does it not Neva

You know I love it and you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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beautiful piece neva!
a great ode to the craft!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Still, your poetry mesmerizes me. I must say that your work requires more than just one reading to be perfectly understood. I had to slowly read this to understand what you were trying to say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Amazing words ...I don't run from stinging or soothing words :) ...tremendous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sublime your writing my dear Neva ..
Vos mots sont Puissant ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 21, 2011
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Tags: poetry, writing, obsession, possession, words

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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