Moved As I Remember

My breath hung on the faintest touch,
loving deeply and unashamed.
I gave my soul's secrets to a heart glowing
with a desire to see the gentleness of life
through an obsidian whisper of glass.
A heart that savored heights of happiness
within vibrating rings issued from a sword's blade.

I deeply treasured my appointment within the circular maze of this love
while simultaneously reading the prints
that it left upon my soul.
They were the color my mind dreamed in,
wondrously prompting warm flames for me to fall into.

Phrases walked into places never been before, curving their fingers
around the notes that played the tune of my emotions,
then danced upon pure clouds of captivation.
Unknowingly they created a celestial answer
for these eyes filled with grief.

I am moved as I remember waiting for my skin to be touched
in places where alone had marked complaints
here and there upon my hours.
When ribbons of truth gave passage
my mouth unfolded in a smile that connected
passionately with your own.

Author's Note

Artist - Xie Yu Chu - http://www.jiyougallery.com/Summer-Rose-p14519.html

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

What an extremely touching and moving piece. I love when I can relate to the piece and feel the emotions within the write. This one touched me deep..I am moved as I remember waiting for my skin to be touched in places where alone had marked complaints here and there upon my hours. Oh how I can relate to these words. As always Neva wonderful work with your magical pen...
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[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

"...an obsidian whisper of glass"

You had me hooked at that line. What a beautiful phrase. Thank you! It's so beautiful...

This is a deep and amazing poem. I love it !

[Muse]

Your words dance like magic with every poem you do. I envy how you sparkle..........xo

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
A very beautiful poem that is stacked with vivid imagery that captivated my thoughts for hours. Very well done, I am in ah.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[joshua deathdealer]

I love depth and the emotions that this write stirs within me. Excellent write Neva.

[?]

Wow another moving piece, yes so touching.
Filled with emotion, passion.
Smooth, soft flow.
Beautiful
I am loving the way you write. :)

[FallenWingz]

Moving & touching leaving the reader with a sense of deep devotion in your words wonderful.

[Aidz]

Its all been said except... wonderousful

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

simply beautiful!

[Dream Weaver]

Gorgeous description with passion and
sorrow blending so well together...