Serenading Your Basis

You are a perfect branch
descending
from yourself.
I have been waiting
at your roots,
trying to find myself.  

Which part of your trunk
do I stem from,
I cry out to the moon.
Am I not a part of you
whose flowers
are in tune?

I am sharing needful moments
full of sensations anew;
becoming naked
with each breath I take,
singing a song
of truth.

Staring into forever
my heart pounds
with hopes and dreams.
I am waiting at your roots,
with beauty bursting
at my seams.

You are a perfect branch,
no need to conform.
I am here
serenading your roots
to become your flowers that adorn.

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

For me there is a sense of awe about this piece. It speaks to me of how we become intertwined with the beloved, Such lovely writing.

My favorite line--
Which part of your trunk
do I stem from,
I cry out to the moon.
Am I not a part of you
whose flowers
are in tune?

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was brilliant. Beautiful, unique. This is love, but with nature tied into it. I love your imagery in this, and your references to a tree and flower.
Simply gorgeous.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was beautifully written! The ending sumed it all up, excellent writing!

[Nishant Gupta]

beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[KAREN]

Beautiful, and the flow and imagery made it real.
100/100

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is a beautiful, epic piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for nature. If more of us show care and appreciation for nature. World would be in a better place. I enjoyed the complete poem. Felt like a Native American Shaman prayer to the growing herbs and medicine. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[WatashLegend]

splendid poem and great flow, your metaphor is beautiful

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully penned, great lines! Nicely done. Great write!

[Senseless whatever]

Have to agree with Audrey 100%. Just awe inspiring and heartfelt.

[Shep]

Awesome poem Love the idea and the feeling it presented Nicely done.