Mailing Letters to the Moon

Mailing Letters to the Moon

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Stop and wonder how a heart breaks then makes friends who give of themselves until they bleed out on the cold floors of the world...........

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Before you can feel the soft touch of poetry
and it can play a song for you,
look for the positive aspect in moonlit shadows.
Stop and wonder
how a heart breaks then makes friends
who give of themselves
until they bleed out on the cold floors
of the world.

Do you find that time lays heavy on you
within dreams
where snow melts in pictures
of piercing eyes
that mail letters to the moon.
Or are you afraid to look out the window
and stop pretending
you are falling in love with being all alone
with just your heart and a slingshot?

What litters the path where your feet move
calling out to the sky
that there is no magic wish
staring at you
waiting for you to finish.
Does your breath catch in conversations
held with snowflakes
that spin and bow then fade away
leaving you to wonder
where you go
from here.

Has it come to the point
where you walk in the places
where white lies run through the stream of life?
Does innocence struggle with colors
that make our eyes believe nothing is true
when something new becomes old
inside of winds that creep
and freeze like icicles.

Before you can feel the soft touch of poetry
and it can play a song for you,
you must have walked this path
I have described.
Do not stand up and leave with your
thoughts racing,
climbing higher and higher,
lest you become one of those hearts
that bleed.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Straight to my heart and to my favourites, this shadow may not be moonlit but he is brightened by your tender words to our beloved poetry and to how it gives us the freedom otherwise only found in dreams. You really captured the romance and the beauty words can give, never stop. Keep em' coming

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Wow..magic type of writing...truly a masterpiece!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A tactile and seriously delivered piece, well done, great read my darling.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah..for so many reasons. Again you embrace my heart..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Straight to my heart and to my favourites, this shadow may not be moonlit but he is brightened by your tender words to our beloved poetry and to how it gives us the freedom otherwise only found in dreams. You really captured the romance and the beauty words can give, never stop. Keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my gosh, this is amazing. You described this so amazing, I am so amazed here. Great job.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 14, 2011
Last Updated on November 15, 2011
Tags: moon, letters, poetry, song, bleed, hearts

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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