My Heart Speaks Your Language

My Heart Speaks Your Language

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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When you close your eyes do you know what is dawning as a torchlight on the silver glass of your soul?

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When you close your eyes
do you know
what is dawning
as a torchlight on the silver glass
of your soul?
Does your heart like mine
throb with words
crying out to breathe life
into the darkness of your world
and for once,
be understood by all?

If our words could stand up
and dance in the light
of a moon shining on love
they could be loud enough
for others to learn.
Until everything said
played out in a scene of seconds
full of trust, never ending
or needing
to be discerned.

My heart speaks the language
that your heart understands.
Our thoughts
are one and the same.
Your heart too,
speaks the language 

my heart understands.
Each of our words
cries out to breathe life
into the darkness,
oh......
if only they could dance.


© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
For my dear friend in India Maini Sk I generally am known to write poems of romance. Not this one...this is about the universal language of love and trust and peace that is in all the hearts of mankind. If we only try to listen to one another perhaps our words will dance.

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Your poem has an awesome message, very nicely written.
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss you. What are you seeing. Love your poetry

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotions are the same worldwide, and there is no language barrier. Very nice, Neva.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Does your heart like mine
throb with words
crying out to breathe life
into the darkness of your world
and for once,
be understood by all?" - that says it all right there, lovely poem. Rather a Great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Language is but a means to communicate. And it is not the only available option, as you have perfectly elucidated in your poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

**takes a deep breath** master in your ways... I love how you opened with question... your writes are so elegant... love your style!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

may i have the next dance

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem that flows elegantly from line to line. A romantic read that fills the heart with warmth to imagine such a scene...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And it speaks that to me, Neva- as in your author's note.
"If only they could dance" - Would that not be the best?
I enjoyed this poem and the picture. You always have wonderful images with your lovely soothing words.

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love is a universal language. Without words it's still understood..so easy to communicate. So easy to share.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 20, 2012
Last Updated on March 20, 2012
Tags: language, heart, soul, words, dance, light, darkness

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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