More than a Man

More than a Man

A Poem by Nameless
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A song wanting to be more than a man but a success.

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I’m only a man

Wondering who I am.

I’m only a mystery

To society I am history.

How this day will end

I don’t know,

But I’m tired of falling

Where on earth will I go?

 

There is hope,

Hope beyond the river.

There is truth,

Truth to all men to come.

There is love,

Love for the poor abounding.

Just don’t give up

Don’t give up,

I need you.

 

I’ve been wondering some time now,

Enough questions of when, where, how.

I won’t stand still no longer

It’s time now that I get stronger.

I won’t just stare at the door

Waiting for what’s in store.

Oh, I will make my move

And success to the world I’ll prove.

 

There is hope,

Hope beyond the river.

There is truth,

Truth to all men to come.

There is love,

Love for the poor abounding.

Just don’t give up

Don’t give up,

I need you.

 

 

© 2010 Nameless


Author's Note

Nameless
Why did I choose iron man for this picture? I wish I could answer that question.

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I like this poem. It makes me think of someone who refuses to give up and keeps going no matter what wall is blocking their way..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very interesting. Not much more I can say right now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Strong poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The poem is hopeful and strong in purpose. I like the flow and the story. Hope is necessary for us to go forward in a life. We must help each other with kind words and friendly smile. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem is automatically awesome for the Iron Man picture =P. Joking aside, I actually really do dig the optimistic nature of this poem, it's really cool, and very true to pretty much anyones life! Keep it up man!

Posted 10 Years Ago


You know you could sing this like a song! It would be so cool!! Either way this is a very good piece 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


There is hope,
Hope beyond the river.
There is truth,
Truth to all men to come.
There is love,
Love for the poor abounding.
Just don’t give up
Don’t give up,
I need you.

Those lines really stood out to me. I liked the feel of this as well as the message it carries. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very positive and uplifting poem. It would make a fantastic song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rather optimistic. This piece is oozing with strength.
My favorite line:
Oh, I will make my move
And success to the world I’ll prove.

Inspiring write!
Alex

Posted 10 Years Ago



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