Beautiful

A poem i wrote to my wonderful love James. 8 months and still going strong

Beautiful smile 

Blue eyes

Perfect clear sunny skies

Funny times 

Funny moments

Great times those make together

Wind in your face

Hair flowing about

Clear blue crystal eyes

I cant help but stare them down

Talking so fast

Cause I’m so nervous

I wonder every second if you noticed

The biggest grin creeps upon my face

When it comes toward the end of the day

The smile lasts through the night

Though I sleep 

Its awake and its restless 

I go to sleep and its there

When I wake up

Its still very clear

Many great memories 

Non that I’ll forget

They will last

Locked safely away

Reviews

[Sean Allen]

Very nice love poem, I like the talking so fast part.

ps: there are many of us who care deeply about you and all the young men and women who serve.

[melissa]

soo sweet i wish i had love like that:)

[Gandré]

This was so sweet - with - all the details you like about him.. and about your life. A wonderful way, how I start my day.

[the_stoic]

"great memories .. safely locked away" ... its strange how these memories might become the main source of your pain somewhere down the time line (i sincerely wish that never happens) .. though somethings are beyond our control .. enjoy these loving moments and try to create a bonding such that they last for a lifetime .. going by your write all i'll say is congrats ! you are in love ...