Alas

Alas, alas
Today she is fragile, akin to delicate glass
Her fire of yesterday passed,
Today, weak and weary
Look away unless you choose to see her clearly
Alas, alas
My poor tired lass

Reviews

[NoelHC]

I like the image of delicate glass, a friend often describes herself as feeling like glass when she has a very difficult day.
Short but well expressed.
Welcome to Writer's Cafe, fellow Albertan.

[Cherry_blossom_red]

Thank you very much :) I'm glad you liked it