Cold

White and blue
The song of warmth long overdue
No green to be seen here
All of it covered by winter's jeer
Come close to the fire, warm your hands
Wish fervently that spring and summer return to the land

Reviews

[Pete]

Sweet. Anticipating. 'The song of warmth long overdue' and 'All of it covered by winter's jeer' - great lines. A terrific write.

[Cherry_blossom_red]

Thank you so much for your review, I'm truly glad you liked it :D :D

[Adarsha Chatterjee]

Short and nice one. How simply you have made the contrast between Summer and Winter? I think you tried to even speak about the state of our mind during this season. Did you?

[Cherry_blossom_red]

That is exactly what I was attempting, glad you read between the lines :) I'm happy that you enjoyed it enough to review it! Thanks a bunch

[JC]

just in time for summer! short and beautiful

[Cherry_blossom_red]

Thank you for reviewing, I'm truly glad you liked it :D