Summer Disappearance

The way my feet feel in the sand

It's summer and I'm alive again

The sun is radiating on me 

My skin is illuminating

The air is fresh

My favorite taste

Something to remind me of

The beautiful possibilities ahead of me

I slip my foot into the water

Feel the soothing liquid burning my toes

It's refreshing, I sigh.

The sun is starting to set

I can almost feel you next to me

Your voice in my ear

Telling me to be brave

I feel a nibble on my toe

It brings me back to reality

But you'll be back again love

You'll be back

Reviews

[Lydia]

I enjoyed your work! Keep on writing.

[koty bell]

this was a touching great poem:)nice work

[RememberAlicia]

It makes me sad. The end is so hopeful and determined, but probably in vain. I relate to it a little too well. I'm not crazy about the the closing lines of the first two stanzas. "The beautiful possibilities ahead of me" just seems to long and out of balance. Overall, I think it's nice. I didn't expect the end.

[Kelsy]

More clearer and vividly done.Nice re-edit

[Kelsy]

Had to read it twice to really get the title (and i sure did).Really Creative