Summer Disappearance

Summer Disappearance

A Poem by Chelsea

The way my feet feel in the sand
It's summer and I'm alive again
The sun is radiating on me 
My skin is illuminating

The air is fresh
My favorite taste
Something to remind me of
The beautiful possibilities ahead of me

I slip my foot into the water
Feel the soothing liquid burning my toes
It's refreshing, I sigh.

The sun is starting to set
I can almost feel you next to me
Your voice in my ear
Telling me to be brave

I feel a nibble on my toe
It brings me back to reality
But you'll be back again love
You'll be back

© 2012 Chelsea


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I enjoyed your work! Keep on writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this was a touching great poem:)nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


It makes me sad. The end is so hopeful and determined, but probably in vain. I relate to it a little too well. I'm not crazy about the the closing lines of the first two stanzas. "The beautiful possibilities ahead of me" just seems to long and out of balance. Overall, I think it's nice. I didn't expect the end.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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More clearer and vividly done.Nice re-edit

Posted 7 Years Ago


Had to read it twice to really get the title (and i sure did).Really Creative

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 24, 2012
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Chelsea
Chelsea

Rochester, NY



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I'm Chelsea. Seventeen. I love writing whatever comes to mind. Hopefully someone will enjoy what I have to say. more..

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