Chilled Wine Warm Kiss

Chaiku

 

One glass red wine,

your eyes divine,

two words one match,

warm fire slow dance,

soft jazz  transmits,

relive first glance,

moonlit  picnic,

your hand  in mine

starlit skyline,

our hearts keeptime,

chilled wine warm kiss,

our love  true bliss.

Author's Note

any comments are helpful

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

never heard of chaiku ... i like the meter your poem takes .. the mix of iambic and trochaic arrangements works .. it presents a very specific rhythm when i read it ..especially out loud ...love the title and theme ..very romantic ... simple, the way it should be. :)
E.

[Cherrie Palmer]

by nature I prefer free verse, but I really liked the way the images told a story.
thank you, for the review.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Perect