Just a Boy

He's a boy who wants to be a man 

I'm just a girl who's already a woman 

his spiderman T-shirts inspire me 

I want to get into his little house 

and play with him, playing together 

I love his warmth 

and his generosity 

and he also has this strong manly presence 

that makes me surrender a little in my skin, 

 makes eyes soft 

His loving me  slowly breaks me down

even my Will steps aside for this one,

he loves the girls heart and her skin

he is the girl and I am the boy 

we see the truth and smile

unwinding more each time 

we're going backwards to untangle 

so can go forwards 

its not even exactly in our control really

it's just unfolding in that way 

I give strength and wisdom this is true 

he gives me himself , his heart 

in his eyes I see 

what I need to see 

I feel that I can trust him, so then the new is born 

he has the best smile, it's wide and just so super cute 

just have to say that 

Love his smile ..

When I look into his eyes

 I see that 

he knows he's taken a risk 

and that its not a mistake 

but still a risk none the same 

I love a man like that 

gets right in the middle 

and flowers and blooms 

right here in my heart 

where else would I wanna be 

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Wow. This is such a heartfelt piece, without being "too much" or "soppy". It's real....your words are real here. You actually lift the reader into your world, like all good writers...right from the opening line....it reminds me of playschool where we have our first encounters....boy meets girl. And then the final lines are beautiful....:) "I see that he knows he's taken a risk......"
Great write..
BB

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Aww yea it does have that innocence I feel , Play ground days... :) thanks for your review

[gsparky22]

I like this. Thanks