In the Moment

Chocolate tastes good 

but the hands of a lover

heals my weary soul

Reviews

[intuitivesoul]

Tasteful! I like it! I think the pink lettering goes well with it

[writer max ride]

CHOCOLATE!!! I agree this is truly amazing work but of course I guess that's you for me! great job
zen-tiger girl!!!! oh and the whole chocolate thing.... read my story about an owl a camera and chocolate.

[Jared Michael Smith]

I like the premise of this haiku, but I feel like the first line needs a little work. It doesn't seem to coincide, as far as style goes, with the other two lines. Just a suggestion, but still a very good poem. :)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

I actually like it like that :) the splitness of it .... does it for me but thanks for your thoughts xxx

[Jared Michael Smith]

You're very welcome. :)

[Writerdragonrider]

short but sweet. I love it!

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

sweet like chocolate ...lol :)

[Writerdragonrider]

lol! yeah haha