I am me -Who am I

Fantasy and reality, inside of her skins 

still pumps with the same blood line to her you know

it does't matter what you say 

still,inside of  her heart, behind locked doors 

and a wall of silky denial, 

the treasure box still glistens

with eyes still wide open 

and half dead lotus teardrops,

her golden thread still remains

and no matter 

if ever seen again 

with you my heart will stay for keeps 

 never the end

always the beginning .

Reviews

[Tenebrousoul]

I liked this one. Made me smile.

[No name]

beautifully written, really enjoyed.

[Moflo]

The imagery in this piece was very well described. Altogether, the images you put out there for your readers are surreal and very captivating. Nice write.

[Kim]

This is wonderful. I liked this alot!

[Me]

Brilliantly delivered

[Walk away slow poet]

So very nicely written, enjoyed the read

[Seshat Nidaba]

This was a stimulting and feminine read: in particular I liked these two gems

1. and a wall of silky denial
2. and half dead lotus teardrops,
her golden thread still remains

I give you high marks, for delicacy.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

:)