As I...

As I drift I sense

Feel with soul

Ease among clouds

Release breath

Inhale beauty

As I touch I shiver

Heat with passion

Caress the moon

Release breath

Inhale divinity

As I taste I dream

Fold within arms

Romance the stars

Release breath

Inhale love

 

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Short but sweet. The flow is easy to follow although some words just didn't appeal much to me. Its simplicity speaks so much.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Gandré]

this was very sweet. I utterly loved this small poem. It made my day.

[cest la vie]

Easy, breezy such a beautiful piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a truly beautiful poem. I love the words you picked to use in this poem. the poem is an easy one to follow.

[Dane Osborne]

Yet another excellent piece, the ecstacy of the soul as it experiences the lightness of finitude and the beauty of transitory reality. Atleast that what I got from it, Bravo!