Words

As he strums the guitar

As he beats at his drums

The poetry spills

It rolls off his tongue

His words curl around me

Cradled in arms

Spinning webs of devotion

Until they surround

The music is in me

He's playing my beat

His layers of velvet, lay at my feet

I open my mouth

Out falls a verse

Our poetry is dancing

No need to converse

As deep as the ocean

As open as a book

Words of devotion

And one tender look

Reviews

[Gandré]

Everything was like waves, just flowing... and being flown.... I Liked Spinning webs of devotion

Until they surround

The music is in me

He's playing my beat

His layers of velvet, lay at my feet

I open my mouth

Out falls a verse ----- such a harmony... loved.

[Lorraine]

How sweet. Words are really more than just a combination of letters, indeed they are expressions of feelings. This poem has a well described view on love.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[cest la vie]

It's all about the words.. they can hook, snare, weave us into this thing called love so fast..
what a great write...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a very honest and sweet poem. It conveys your love in a different way and I like poems that are unique.

[Dane Osborne]

This is some good stuff. Tasteful and subtle use of ryhme scheme and your words convey beautifully the sensations of experience that many people who write try to do but often fail, I like your writing:)

[St.Jimmy]

this is amazing!
how it flows
I am glad to read this
the "words" really make it special
Good choice!
~Aaradhya

[la Abeja]

This is REALLY AWESOME! The rhythm and flow perfectly balanced the picture you painted. Great write!