I dance

I dance in waves of colour

Body sways to imaginary beat

Keeping time with sweet rhythm of the ocean

I stamp and tap my feet

I dance in waves of passion

Arms flow through air

Keeping time with the rhythm of the breeze

Flowing in circles, with dancing flair

I dance in waves of desire

Legs move with beauty's grace

Keeping time with the rhythm of your heartbeat

Eyes meet, through time and space

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Wonderfully descriptive. A well-written descriptive poem that gives a lovely mental image to its readers. I like the way it was written in a light, joyous way as if the words are also dancing along with its meaning. Great Read.

Keep Writing. ^__^

[MagiCrystal]

A complete control .. your soul dances.. to complete control. love it

[Gandré]

this is a small treasure, such a harmony and oneness with the universe..... I liked this a lot.

[cest la vie]

Such a light and airy piece here..
Great rhymes and flow..Nicely done!!

[Thomas Fleet]

Great poem! Passionately written, lovely rhyme scheme, and great structure!
I also like your choice of words throughout this poem.
My favorite lines were the first two.
Thank you for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a simple poem that is beautiful and portrays you emotions and your story in a splendid way.

[Dane Osborne]

I loved this, this had extrordinary wordplay and flow. this had a very whimisical vibe that i realy dug, kudos:)