Something More.

Something more than liking,

something more than dating,

something more than marriage.

 

Something more than hugging,

something more than cuddling,

something more than kissing.

 

Something more than what you're thinking of,

something more than you want.

 

Pleasure that is something more.

Affectionate love that is something more.

A feeling that is something more.

 

Something more is on it's way.

Something more is coming soon.

something more is what will be.

Author's Note

Well, my friend (Ashley Rivers) said that I needed to post something new...well, this is the kind of stuff that has been on my mind lately... but, uh, something more..lol (;

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. I like the use of repetition to make the point in the poem. Good flow of thoughts led the reader to a good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chesney W.]

thanks for the review

[trainwreck]

Very artfully done. I haven't read much of your writing (as far as I can tell), but I enjoyed this quite a bit. Good job!

[Chesney W.]

thank you

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

lol I get it. must be a special guy. he must be lucky to have you :). i really liked it. 100/100

[Chesney W.]

sure is..thanks for the review

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

nice and no problem

[Bella]

hahahaha wow... I like it. i gottcha drift by the way (; hahaha it must be one special guy

[Chesney W.]

most definately ..lol...thanks for the review