Not Strong.

Not Strong.

A Poem by FrikinFrancesca

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I know what I did was wrong,
You and I both know I wasn't strong enough.
Not for this relationship to last,
We should just sit down and put everything in the past.
I have been putting on this mask from you,
in hopes you won't ask.

You don't trust me. You never will.
Maybe after all this wasn't meant to be.
To me the thrill is gone.
Our perfect relationship took the crumble.
Now were all on the ground in this jumble.

You want this to work.
but all it seems is for you to lerk.
Down to my heart in which it will hurt.
I see the end and it's with you.
Those are my words, and their true.

© 2009 FrikinFrancesca




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i dont know, as i read this, the end seemed so abrupt
i found myself adding in my head

"Those are my words and theyre true....

I wasnt strong enough
Not strong enough for you"

just a suggestion of course
but great write
though you could improve the grammar a lil

well done
=]
xo

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i dont know, as i read this, the end seemed so abrupt
i found myself adding in my head

"Those are my words and theyre true....

I wasnt strong enough
Not strong enough for you"

just a suggestion of course
but great write
though you could improve the grammar a lil

well done
=]
xo

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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