I need you (not what you're thinking)

I need you to show me, what I don't want to be

I love that you hate it

How we co-exist

With more resistance

I hate that I like it

I must be a sadist

It's confusing, it doesn't make sense

But I don't care anymore

I'm just a creep

Starving for war

Come and get it

It's only one moment

Author's Note

How fast time flies!

Reviews

[Bluefire]

Wow I love this!
It reminds me of Shizu-Chan and Iza-Chan's relationship.
Love-hate.
Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Hm....thanks. I had a relationship with this one guy (on this website) that was similar to Shizu-chan's and Iza-chan's. xD
Thank you very much. :)

[Bluefire]

XD Awesome lol
No problem!

[Chidoriflower]

He had such a short temper. ;D

[Bluefire]

XD just like Shizu-chan.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So much Raw Emotion pain but also love
but you have those hurting feeling inside and you
want to yell and get all the pain out
and I would never want to be Numb because feeling
makes me human for we wouldn't be able to love
the one's that do need us and we do heal a bit from the
pains and we learn god pain trials and things that happen
in our lives are like teachers we become stronger from it
as well.


Hold your head high there is always a beautiful
rainbow waiting on the other side after the storm
is over and god helped us through it and kept telling
us that we will conquer it and get through this.

So remember no matter how painful or hard something
is never give up it is always making us strong it is preparing
us for something so much Greater and it is Maturing us.

I love these lines. Blessings


I need you to show me, what I don't want to be
I love that you hate it

How we co-exist

[Chidoriflower]

Your review is a poem. :) You hit it right on the head. Thank you.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're are very welcome My pleasure. Blessings

[Angels heart]

Pretty deep, but it makes you want to think of a story to go with it, thanks to your poem I got an god idea for a story, thanks for the inspiration.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you and you're welcome. :D

[Angels heart]

I will defiantly tell you when I put up the story, it's a promise

[Chidoriflower]

Okey dokey. :P

[Rose of many colours]

HMM SO TRUE..A NEED TO BE CLOSE TO SOME ONE GOD BLESS YOU

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, I greatly appreciate it. Have a happy Thanksgiving. :)

[Rose of many colours]

Realy today is Thanksgiving

[Chidoriflower]

Yes...It is Thanksgiving. :)

[Rose of many colours]

What part of the world is this

[Chidoriflower]

I'm in California as of now....:)

[Rose of many colours]

ok great must be a nice place

[L.Edward]

Wow, I dig your brutal honesty! It says to me that sometimes pain can feel good. That sometimes its better than feeling nothing at all. At least you know your alive. And the substance of the pain gives you something to hold onto to pull your self up on. I can really relate to that. There are times when I have felt like this. Especially in some of the relationships I have been in. It captures the essence of that emotional intensity in a very real way!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, kind sir.

[L.Edward]

Your absolutely welcome. My pleasure. Best wishes.

[Horizons]

You i don't know how but lost me into the world of memory's. Time really flies very fast i must agree here with you... i felt the poem, you write from the bottom of your heart, i've got from your stuffs you've written. This's a piece totally based on everyone's life who're in love or who always fall in the love of someone and got hurt because love is too included into the list of peace and honesty because love always never let you live free, howsoever, love gives you pain as well. It's a great concept you came up with... i liked your flow. Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you!!! Your reviews are so refreshing! Once again, thank you.