Dance (or fight) of Beautiful, Bloody Death

I was just thinking of Sebastian and Grell when I wrote this....:)

Dye me in the intensity of your passion 

Splatter the walls with it's gory paganism

Dress me in scarlet, the latest fashion

The world is a stage, and I an actress

Twirl me a line with your cold disgust

And give me bittersweet, stimulating distress

You'd look fabulous in the streaks of blush

You are a blossoming black rose in the moonlight

Your dark composure, oh, makes me flush

The metal tearing away at your flesh makes me shiver

Yes, this is a romance, forbidden and exciting

Just to feel the touch of your hands makes my legs quiver 

Blazing white-hot sparks are aflame in my fluttering chest

The wind plays in the streets, and the moon illuminates us

If only for one night you would listen to my behest 

Give way, and feel the steel of my blade, dear darling

And let us dance the dance of eternal, blissful death

Give me this pleasure and pain, I assure you, I'm starving....

Reviews

[Bluefire]

This will surely give you shivers and make your heart race as if you were the one dancing away in a chaotic dream.
I love these, for some reason it made me think of the song Marionette by Antonia.
Very well played!

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you very much! Your reviews are magical and clever. ^^ I love that song

[Bluefire]

Me too.
And you're welcome! ^^

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is exploding with vivid imagery and passion. Each line is powerful enough to stand alone shining a light into the darkness. Together these lines illuminate the tempest that surrounds us all, empowering us to rise from our cowering haunches, to boldly stride into the unknowable future.
Your work is wonderful.
You are amazing.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so very much; I always find encouragement in your words. :) Have a good one! :)

[Rose of many colours]

VERY HOT SPICY HOT. GREAT AND DEEP XEPRESSION OF FEELINGL I LIKE WHAT I HEAR GREAT WRITE GOD BLESS

[Chidoriflower]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! :D :)