Night-Time

Night-Time

A Poem by Chidoriflower
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When you’re alone in the dark 
The thoughts rush in like spies

So many all at once, teaming in the silence

It builds up in the chest cavity, in the stomach

Until it spills out in the form of physical pain

It’s the same thoughts, the same feelings you’ve felt before

Why do they still pound so desperately against the head

“Why am I not good enough?” “Why do I want to die all the time?”

“Why can’t I breathe?” 

 The thoughts, how I hate them, how I hate the way they whisper

 But there is always good, good things in the world that can one day quiet them

© 2016 Chidoriflower


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Chidoriflower
This is more like what I usually do, putting how I feel into words, kind of

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I felt sad while reading this, but I felt instantly better at the end. I love your resolution c:

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Chidoriflower

2 Years Ago

Thank you, that's what I was going for, thank you for the review!

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Added on December 18, 2016
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Chidoriflower
Chidoriflower

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I love reading, from YA books to classic English literature. Writing is my vent usually. I'm gay as hell. I like food, anime, videogames, and traditional dances. (Like waltzing, salsa, west/east coast.. more..

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